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每個(gè)人都曾試圖在平淡的學(xué)習(xí)、工作和生活中寫一篇文章。寫作是培養(yǎng)人的觀察、聯(lián)想、想象、思維和記憶的重要手段。寫范文的時(shí)候需要注意什么呢？有哪些格式需要注意呢？接下來(lái)小編就給大家介紹一下優(yōu)秀的范文該怎么寫，我們一起來(lái)看一看吧。
托福滿分作文新東方 托福滿分作文(篇一
你是否很難羨慕有些同學(xué)托福作文能拿到滿分的?下面是小編整理的托福滿分作文的三大核心，希望對(duì)大家有幫助，更多消息請(qǐng)關(guān)注應(yīng)屆畢業(yè)生網(wǎng)。
ets 8月發(fā)布了2015年托?？忌煽?jī)報(bào)告，中國(guó)托?？忌骄?8分，6年來(lái)幾乎沒啥變化，其中寫作20分。講真，這個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)比較符合語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)規(guī)律，沒有大量的輸入就不會(huì)有更好的輸出。從小到大，我們英語(yǔ)作文沒少寫，可托福寫作還是容易遇到瓶頸，18—20—20—19，和國(guó)足的戰(zhàn)績(jī)一樣穩(wěn)定，歸根結(jié)底6個(gè)字：“沒有掌握方法”。
首先我們先從結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言三個(gè)方面揭秘托福作文獨(dú)立任務(wù)得滿分的真相。
以下題為例： do you agree or disagree with the following statement? life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions.
按題材劃分，獨(dú)立任務(wù)屬于議論文，而論點(diǎn)、理由、論據(jù)、結(jié)論和論證是議論文的五個(gè)要素。具體來(lái)說(shuō)，“論點(diǎn)”是文章的核心，“理由”是論點(diǎn)成立的依據(jù)，兩者構(gòu)成因果關(guān)系;“論據(jù)”是對(duì)理由的具體解釋，多為事例;“結(jié)論”是對(duì)觀點(diǎn)的重申，兩者一脈相承、頭尾呼應(yīng);而整個(gè)寫作過(guò)程就是一個(gè)“論證”的'過(guò)程。
要想作文得高分，這五要素就必須面面俱到，如此才能寫出結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、條理清晰的高分作文
先上一篇范文(下拉可見全文)：
as society progresses remarkably, tremendous changes have taken place in people’s life. nevertheless, some senior citizens cherish the memory of good old days with healthy environment and harmonious interpersonal relationships. as far as i’m concerned, despite serious environmental pollution and prevalence of materialism, 【背景介紹，作者給出了兩個(gè)時(shí)代的對(duì)比】 i still believe today’s life to be easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. 【提出論點(diǎn)】 i am going to elaborate my viewpoint from three aspects as follows. 【過(guò)渡句，承上啟下】
to begin with, modern communication technology has changed our lives a lot and provides us with much convenience. 【理由 1】to be more specific, with the wide application of smartphones and the internet, it is possible for people to contact each other even if they live separately. 【論證為什么理由 1 可以推出觀點(diǎn)】 for example, lily, one of my best friends, is lucky to be admitted into a famous university in america, which means we cannot always hang out together. but thanks to the modern communication technology, we still keep frequent touch with each other on skype anytime, anywhere. therefore we feel never apart.
【例子 1】
besides, a variety of means of transportation make it quick and cozy for people to travel. 【理由 2】 subways, taxis, private cars, high-speed railways shorten the distance between places. 【論證為什么理由 2 可以推出觀點(diǎn)】a good example in point is that my grandparents used to live in suburbs, and anytime they want to do some shopping in urban center, it usually took them 2 hours, owing to bumpy roads and low-efficient old-fashioned vehicles. on the contrary, with great improvement of road condition and advanced traffic modes, they only have to spend 20 minutes a most traveling from home to the city. if it is very hot in summer, all modern vehicles are air-conditioned, which can make the trip very comfortable.
【例子 2】
last but not least, today’s ample food supply and various food choices are something beyond imagination in the past. 【理由 3】 decades ago, in china, all foods used to be arranged by the government. in other words, it was impossible for people to purchase what they liked to eat. 【論證為什么理由 3 可以推出觀點(diǎn)】 for example, an average family was only allocated 1 pound of pork and 2 pounds of rice. in contrast, nowadays, we never have to worry about the lack of food because supermarkets and snack bars abound.
【例子 3】
to sum up, because of the progress of economy and technology, i am convinced that life at present is more comfortable and easier, which can be well demonstrated through examples of convenient communication, quick and cozy traffic modes and sufficient food supply and choices. 【總結(jié)理由，重申觀點(diǎn)】 if our government takes efficient measures to solve the environmental problem, our world will become a better place to live.
【提出建議，展望未來(lái)】
議論文除了五要素，在給出論點(diǎn)之前多會(huì)有簡(jiǎn)單的背景介紹，不需要長(zhǎng)，三兩句話即可，為論點(diǎn)的提出造勢(shì)。
這篇范文通過(guò)通訊、交通和飲食三個(gè)方面，共同論證現(xiàn)在的孩子相較其祖父輩生活的更輕松、舒適，每個(gè)理由下面都有具體的事例作為細(xì)節(jié)支撐，讓論證更有說(shuō)服力。
以飲食為例，作者舉例說(shuō)，以前食品由政府分配，數(shù)量有限制，人們不能隨心所欲買到需要的食品;而現(xiàn)在則大不一樣，在超市里人們可以買到任何所需物品。這種新舊對(duì)比，更鮮明的表現(xiàn)出現(xiàn)代社會(huì)物資豐富、人們的選擇權(quán)增加，由此可推斷人們的生活變得更便捷、舒適，從而證明論點(diǎn)。
一篇高分作文在語(yǔ)言上，首先要保證語(yǔ)法正確，用詞恰當(dāng)，這樣才能準(zhǔn)確達(dá)意。在此基礎(chǔ)上可以追求更多樣、高級(jí)的表達(dá)。例如，文章開頭要表現(xiàn)“社會(huì)發(fā)展迅速，人們的生活發(fā)生了天翻地覆的變化”這一含義，最常見的表達(dá)為：
sample 1: our society develops quickly, and people’s life has changed greatly.
sample 2: with the rapid development of society, enormous change has happened in people’s life.
sample 3: as society progresses remarkably, tremendous changes have taken place in people’s life.
通過(guò)三個(gè)句子對(duì)比可知，其中“迅速”的三種表達(dá)方式，quickly 最為平淡，rapid 居中，remarkable 最佳。同樣的，要表達(dá)“翻天覆地”的含義，tremendous 就要比 great 或者 enormous 好的多，其他替換的詞還有 considerable，drastic，significant 等等。
語(yǔ)言的優(yōu)化需要不斷的積累和練習(xí)，多記多練，不斷擴(kuò)充自己的語(yǔ)料庫(kù)，唯有如此，文章才會(huì)寫的越來(lái)越漂亮，但是咱們很多考生平時(shí)不練筆，不積累語(yǔ)料，想單純依賴“復(fù)雜單詞，黃金句型”就拿高分——基本沒戲。
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